I wrote a poem about raspberries using cool similes.
week 4
I wrote a recount about the mud slide I got a 2A. I used a personification...the wind whipping around my ears.
week 6
I did a another recount called explosion and again I got a 2A. I used the powerful word transfixed!
week 8
I wrote 2 reports. One was about spiders and another one was about lady bugs. I researched information about ladybirds and found out they are part of the beetle family. I achieved 2A for both reports.
term 3
My goal is to move from 2A in unassisted writing.
week 2
I wrote story called wheres my glasses and I got a 2a to 3b
week 4
I wrote anther story called stop carlos 2p to 2a
week 6
I wrote anther story called dance peformence a bit of the story goes like this as I stare at the sharp blue sky.
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